From 7ab93a0c38f02bf1194759b248ca1591d9688660 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Colin Jones <trptcolin@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2013 20:46:19 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Touch up some grammar & wording

---
 src/koans/01_equalities.clj              | 4 ++--
 src/koans/10_lazy_sequences.clj          | 6 +++---
 src/koans/11_sequence_comprehensions.clj | 7 ++++---
 src/koans/20_partition.clj               | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/koans/01_equalities.clj b/src/koans/01_equalities.clj
index 9d4a6af..0d1a61d 100644
--- a/src/koans/01_equalities.clj
+++ b/src/koans/01_equalities.clj
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 (meditations
-  "We shall contemplate truth by testing reality, via equality."
+  "We shall contemplate truth by testing reality, via equality"
   (= __ true)
 
-  "To understand reality, we must compare our expectations against reality."
+  "To understand reality, we must compare our expectations against reality"
   (= __ (+ 1 1))
 
   "You can test equality of many things"
diff --git a/src/koans/10_lazy_sequences.clj b/src/koans/10_lazy_sequences.clj
index 3a88a53..eb5c5f3 100644
--- a/src/koans/10_lazy_sequences.clj
+++ b/src/koans/10_lazy_sequences.clj
@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
 (meditations
-  "There are a wide range of ways to generate a sequence"
+  "There are many ways to generate a sequence"
   (= __ (range 1 5))
 
   "The range starts at the beginning by default"
   (= __ (range 5))
 
-  "It's important to only take what you need from a big sequence"
+  "Only take what you need when the sequence is large"
   (= [0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9]
      (take __ (range 100)))
 
-  "You can also limit results by dropping what you don't need"
+  "Or limit results by dropping what you don't need"
   (= [95 96 97 98 99]
      (drop __ (range 100)))
 
diff --git a/src/koans/11_sequence_comprehensions.clj b/src/koans/11_sequence_comprehensions.clj
index b967155..9b48583 100644
--- a/src/koans/11_sequence_comprehensions.clj
+++ b/src/koans/11_sequence_comprehensions.clj
@@ -17,16 +17,17 @@
      (for [index __ :when (odd? index)]
        index))
 
-  "And they trivially allow combinations of the two transformations"
+  "Combinations these transformations is trivial"
   (= '(1 9 25 49 81)
      (map (fn [index] (* index index))
           (filter odd? (range 10)))
      (for [index (range 10) :when __]
        __))
 
-  "More complex transformations can be formed with multiple binding forms"
+  "More complex transformations simply take multiple binding forms"
   (= [[:top :left] [:top :middle] [:top :right]
       [:middle :left] [:middle :middle] [:middle :right]
       [:bottom :left] [:bottom :middle] [:bottom :right]]
-       (for [row [:top :middle :bottom] column [:left :middle :right]]
+       (for [row [:top :middle :bottom]
+             column [:left :middle :right]]
          __)))
diff --git a/src/koans/20_partition.clj b/src/koans/20_partition.clj
index 1d21dd0..9d3dcc6 100644
--- a/src/koans/20_partition.clj
+++ b/src/koans/20_partition.clj
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   "To split a collection you can use the partition function"
   (= '((0 1) (2 3)) (__ 2 (range 4)))
 
-  "But watch out if there is not enough elements to form n sequences"
+  "But watch out if there are not enough elements to form n sequences"
   (= '(__) (partition 3 [:a :b :c :d :e]))
 
   "You can use partition-all to also get partitions with less then n elements"